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Allies x Shy!Reader: Ordering

     Late afternoon, you had thought you'd have this time of the day all for yourself. Sitting on the brown leather couch, a dim lamp lighting the living room and your legs pulled up against you to get a better view of what you were drawing on your new sketchpad; Kiku had given you the sketchpad two days ago with a few pencils and erasers after he heard you had an interest in drawing.

There was a gentle tapping of the rain hitting your window behind the closed curtains and a distant rumble of thunder, but what made this all the better was your cup of (f/d) sitting beside you on the end table. It wasn't until your phone decided to ring out and disturb your thoughts you were currently drawing on your sketchpad.

You looked up from your sketchpad and glared at your kitchen; where the phone was located making those irritating rings. Its these times any artist hates, getting interrupted. What makes it worse is getting up from your spot where your art supplies are scattered around you. Lazily you put your supplies away, got up, and headed to the kitchen to answer your phone.

"Hello, what do you need...?" you answered in a grumpy tone.

The line was silent until a recognizable voice shouted through the phone, Alfred.

"Hey (y/n)! What do you saying to go and getting some food with me and the allies?"


Before you could say no, Alfred decided for you.

"Great! We'll be over at your place in ten minutes!"

"Wait, What!-" The lines goes out before you can deny anything.

Slamming the phone, you go back to your spot, flop down, and drink the rest of your drink before the allies arrive. To be honest, you've always liked hanging out with any of the countries, even though you were the only human; they were always so nice to you.

There's  just only one problem...You told Alfred that you were shy and now he invites you to every single little get together he goes to and tries to help you break out of your shell, but instead he ends up embarrassing you more, and unfortunately he does not take no for an answer.

-10 minutes later-

A loud car honk outside your house caught your attention and made your stomach drop. They were here. You fixed your outfit and grabbed your phone before leaving. Before opening the front door you passed by the hallway mirror and made eye contact with yourself.

“You can do this (y/n), Get out of your shell”

Sighing, you turned the knob on the front door and stepped out. A cold breeze hit your face making your eyes shut close and your nose scrunch in shock at how cold it actually was, even though it was only the beginning the September. With the thundering rain in the background, you looked over at your drive way and squinted your eyes to get a better look at Alfred’s black Hummer H3 through the dark, almost night afternoon. Quickly you shut your front door, locked it and made a dash for the Hummer.

You could feel your stomach twist and turn with anxiety when the sound of an unlocking door clicked and the back door swung open, barley missing you.

“Nǐ hǎo (y/n)!” Yao smiled at you, barely visible through the darkness as he scooted over to the middle of the seat, giving you the window seat. You smiled at him, he knew you so well.

Jumping in, you took your seat beside Yao and shut the door.

"HEEY-YOO (y/n)!" Alfred shouted from the driver’s seat; which was in front of you.

You looked up, his face visible due to the hummer’s headlight hitting your garage door, and noticed Alfred fixing the rear view mirror to get a better look at you through the darkness. You made eye contact with him and smiled shyly. Feeling your face heat up you quickly looked down at your lap and played with your fingers.

The rest of the Allies said their hellos, Ivan and Matthew in the very back, Arthur who sat beside Yao on the other side behind the passenger seat, and Francis.

“Bonjour (y/n), you look lovely tonight” Francis winked at you from the passenger seat in a very flirty matter. You were sure that by now your face was a maroon red.

Out of all the Allies, you were never really close enough to call Francis a friend. You’ve tried to befriend the Frenchman multiple times, but his flirty advances towards you made it impossible for you to speak to him. It was better to just avoid him, but you didn’t want to hurt his feelings.

“Off we go then!” A thrilled Alfred cheered as he turned his rock music to full blast.

“Alfred!” You could hear Arthur’s irritated voice ring through the music.

You could see Alfred from the rear view mirror groan and turn the music down to a soft beat as he put the hummer in reverse, backed out of your driveway and into the street. The hummer moved a bit forward as he changed it to drive and speed off the street towards the main city.

“Thank you” Arthur muttered.

For most of the ride it was surprisingly calm. Alfred, Francis, Yao and Arthur started a conversation about the economy of each other’s countries. Their relaxed voices mixed well with the gentle tapping of rain on the hummer’s roof. Matthew sat in the back with Ivan, a seat in between them to avoid any conversation, however, Matthew was quietly arguing with his baby polar bear about god knows what. Ivan started out the window with a small smile forming on his lips.

From the outside you seemed calm, but inside you debating whether to start a conversation and try getting out of your comfort zone, or stay quiet for the rest of the ride. You cursed yourself over and over again wishing you were a more outgoing person or at least start talking to Ivan and Matthew and keep the conversation going and interesting.

You might have some luck with Ivan, maybe not so much with Matthew. He was shy as well and when two shy people talk to each other, it usually turns out to be awkward. There was also the chance you could join the discussion between Alfred, Francis, Arthur and Yao.

“Hey, Yao…?” You asked, but the older country ignored your voice.

They wouldn’t want me to butt into their business. They’re countries; they have more important stuff to talk about than have a conversation with boring, non-country girl

Again, you felt useless and you hated beating yourself up for this situation, but what if it’s true? What if they only invited you because they felt sorry for you and never wanted you here? Why would they have an interest in you when you weren’t even a country?

Heaving a sigh, you turned away from the countries and looked out the window to see the city lights, but with the down pour of the rain it made it impossible to see anything. At least you wouldn’t be totally bored, now was a great time to play ‘which rain drop will win’.


Out of all the places we could’ve gone Alfred just to choose-

“Subway, B******!” Alfred fist pumped.

Alfred pulled into the parking lot and parked close enough to the main entrance of Subway. Turning off the ignition he opened his door, not even bothering to close it and ran out to Subway. The opened door made the lights inside the hummer light up and a click signaling that the rest of the doors were unlocked.

Hastily you opened the door and jumped out into the pouring rain, followed by Yao, who ended up slipping and falling into the puddle on his bum.  You shook the water off your jacket once you were in Subway and joined Alfred; who stood on the side with his right index finger tapping his chin and his left hand held underneath his right arm’s elbow.

“I think you forgot to close your door…” You softly spoke to Alfred.

Alfred shook his head and looked over at you; his blue eyes were shining with excitement as he grinned at you. There go your cheeks again.

“Nah, I am sure someone closed it. There’s nothing inside that’s important enough to steal, besides I have the keys to the ignition”

You smiled and let out a small giggle, but once you looked over at the counter where soon enough you’d have to go and order your sandwich your smile faded into you biting your lip. You hated ordering here, you had to talk to the person more just to get your food.

Without notice your mind started swirling with different scenarios. What if you said something wrong and everybody laughed at you? What if you tripped as you walk up to the counter? What if you stuttered and the lady wouldn’t understand you and you had the say the same thing over and over again? What will everybody say when they see your red face? Look, the lady behind the counter is already staring at you, is there visibly something wrong with me right now? You could already hear the laughing in the background, a loud ringing started in your ears…

Stop it (y/n), cut it out!

Finally your mind snapped out of its trance, the sound of laughter faded away. The lady who was patiently standing behind the counter was smiling at you, ready to receive your order.

“Alright, I’ll go first!” Alfred marched over, confidence you wished you had beamed from his face.

Soon enough everybody started lining up ready to order their sandwiches, Francis in front followed by Arthur, you, Yao, Ivan and Matthew. It surprised you that all this time Francis and Arthur had not been in one argument whatsoever, Strange.

“What do you usually order here (y/n)?” Arthur turned around and faced you, his vivid green eyes started into your (e/c).

His voice snapped you out of your thoughts “I’ve actually never been here before…” you began, “it’s my first time”

Arthur smiled “Really? It’s actually a very healthy fast food joint if you pick the right choices”

“I think most people choose the unhealthy choices, yeah?” You pointed out, you could feel your stomach twist and turn again and your blood rushing to your face.

Arthur shrugged “I am sure most of them do. Like that tubby man over there…” he pointed at Alfred, who was now at the cash register laughing at something the cashier said.

You let out a giggle and glanced at Arthur, who let out a small chuckle which sounded like a little snort was mixed into it.

“I can help you over here!”  Another lady had appeared and called for the next customer. Arthur left his post and made his way to the counter and ordered. Once the lady finished up with Alfred she returned to the beginning of the counter and smiled at you making your stomach drop. If only Feliciano were here, you’d ask him to order for you.

“Hello! What type of bread would you like?” she smiled, her light brown hair pulled back into a ponytail and front bangs perfectly shaped her face. Her big blue eyes finished the look.

Why can’t I have hair that makes me look better?

“I’ll have…Italian cheese” you mumbled
“Would you like It 6 inch or foot long?”

“Its okay (y/n)! She doesn’t bite!” Alfred shouted across the building as he waved to you. Now all the attention was to you.

“Zhùkǒu, Alfred!” Yao screamed from the line as he grabbed a napkin dispenser and headshot Alfred right in the face, making his glasses fall and crack on the tile floor.

“That was uncalled for dude! Now who’s going to drive everyone home when I don’t have my glasses!” the American stomped the floor angrily and picked up what was left of his glasses.  Arthur looked over at the two countries and sighed, slightly embarrassed.

“Keep ordering (y/n)! You’re doing great!” Yao cheered for you. You tensed your shoulders. Why did he have to say that? Now people are going to think something is wrong with you.

The lady behind the counter let out a giggle, apologized and repeated her question.

“...uh, 6 inch Italian bmt” by now you could feel yourself shaking and the other countries staring at you, Plus the other customers.

“Its okay honey, no need to be shy” the lady tried to make you feel comfortable, but it only made things worse. “And what type of cheese would you like?”

Shut the f*** up!

“Cheddar …” you hesitated “plea-”

“Do you want your bread toasted?” Her interruption made you feel as if she didn’t care what you said.

“Y-yeah, sure” you murmured.

This was probably the worst night out Alfred as ever invited you to. Things are now getting worse with this sadness you are now developing, almost enough to make your eyes water and cry.

Finally, after everyone had ordered and payed for their sandwiches they all made their way to the largest booth available in the building, everybody was laughing and shouting, getting hyper, throwing stuff around and causing a scene. Arthur tried to calm everyone down only to get hit by a piece of lettuce. Then there was you, seated by the wall beside Matthew, quiet. You tried to talk to Ivan, who was across from you, but once you got his attention someone else would be louder and drown out your voice. Giving up you spent the rest of the evening nibbling on your sandwich.


“Hope you had a good time (y/n)!” Alfred grinned. Even though his glasses were cracked he still wore them. You jumped out of the vehicle and looked back at the countries and smiled a fake smile.

“Yeah! It was fun” you lied.

Everybody else said their farewell’s before you shut the door and made your way to your front door. Opening the door you looked back, waved and entered your home. You threw your keys on the floor and threw your shoes off, then finally throwing yourself on the couch and buried your face into a pillow and let out a small cry.

“Why am I like this, why can’t I ever get out of my shell!” You whispered.

Then, you felt something in your pocket. Raising an eyebrow you reached in and pulled a folded paper.

“What is this?” you questioned.

The note read:


          I know what you’re going through, I know the feeling you’re experiencing; lonely, useless, insecure, depressed, hesitant. I feel the stares you feel whenever you think you do something wrong, the false judgment, being left out, getting home and wishing things were different.  It’s hard I know, but there is a way of getting out and I can see that you desperately want to escape this cycle of shyness, and you will just be patient, everything will work out. Nobody hates you, they all love you, they’re not ignoring you, you just need to speak up. We’re going through this together and I’ll be here if you ever need me.

         Your friend,
             Matthew Williams, Canada
I am so sorry for my absence, I've been having the worst writer's block ever...This story was rushed and I couldn't concentrate 100% because my family kept bothering me, so this might be trashed up.

Have a :iconcharmanderplz:~:heart:

Nǐ hǎo: Hello

Let me know if there's any mistakes!~:heart:

Hetalia(c)Hidekaz Himaruya
Subway(c) Peter Buck and Fred DeLuca
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Theponyfangirl Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2016  Student Artist
Dinky0717 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
MATTIEEEEE!!! *cries then falls off of chair and hits head on table* OWW! Y u no be here in the real world! *cries again while making pancakes*
Pops2131 Featured By Owner May 31, 2016
I really like subway
american-otaku-girl Featured By Owner May 5, 2016  New Deviant
Aww, the ending was adorable!!! I actually do get nervous at Subway... talking to the people there...
PedoBearDafuq Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2016  Hobbyist Interface Designer
my fiend: starbuck hooray!!!!
Canada and kumajiro Canada is so sweet! Great story and kudos to you Golden!
Misteria2477 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
AnimeAddict4321 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you Matthew!! Llama Emoji-23 (Shyness) [V1]  I really needed the encouragement kaomoji set 2 33/67 
LILYPAD1000 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2015
yoloheyo Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2015
This is my favorite thing I have ever read on devientart
gamemaster2themax Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2015
That's y I love Canada!!!
Dinky0717 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Dawwwwwww MATTIE!!!!!😭😭😭
pikachu45638 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I always play which rain drop will win xD and BWAAA TANK U MATTIE
MidnightDash2137 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2015  Student Digital Artist
thank you Canada!!! *hugs*
Katsunuke Featured By Owner May 11, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
OMG that was so adorable Fangirl Emote Fanboy Emote Kofuku Ebisu (Fangirling) [V1] Winx Club Stella Fan Girl Icon Fangirl Scream Emote 
Shyboy2641 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
How sweet Mattie! ^W^
cutepanda88 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2015  Student Digital Artist
That's me every time I go to Subways.
They always ask me to repeat myself. TT_TT
kitsune-cross Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2015  Professional General Artist
Canada. Always a good surprise.😻😍😜
Kairi732 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2015  Student General Artist
Aww! 😍 This is why Canada is my favorite!
NeonBrightDevil9 Featured By Owner Edited Feb 7, 2015  Student Filmographer
HOLY SNAIL I ALWAYS PLAY 'Which Raindrop Will Win'

P.s yey canada cares ^^
crossoversaremylife Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
1. To yourself, say the name of the only guy or girl you wanna be with 3


2. Think of something you wanna accomplish within the next week and say

it to your self 6 times!!

3. If you had 1 wish what would it be? say it to yourself 9 times!!!

4. Think of something that you want to happen between you and that

1special person and say it to your self 12 times!!!

5. Now, heres the hard part! Pick only 1 of these wishes and as you scroll

down focus and concentrate on it and think on nothing else but that wish.

* *

* *

* *

Now make one last & final wish about that one wish that you picked.

After reading this, you have 1 hour to send it out to 15 people, and what

you wished for will come true within in one week!

u only get one chance!!!!! Now scroll down and think of your



Did you think of your crush? I hope so, that was your last chance. Now

pay very close attention this important message!

Sorry but once read, must be sent. Yes, this is one of those kinda chain
letters that everyone hates. This one has been going since 1864 and if you
break this chain, you will pay!!!!!! Remember that after hearing these

First Example:

Take Barbra Wallace.. She was a pretty lucky girl, up till she got this same
chain letter. She had a crush on the same kid since kindergarden. when she
got this mail she didn't pay any attention to it. She just thought, no big deal.
And deleted it. The next day her dad got fired and her mom dies in a car
crash. If she would have sent the letter none of that would have happened
and her mom would be alive.

Second Example:

Try Freddie D. Now Freddie D. was your average nerd. Had glasses, was
short and chubby, was in gifted. All the signs of
your total dork. He also received this letter and sent it to 51
people in the hour. Now, like Barbra, he had a crush on a girl since 3rd
grade. The next day after sending the chain the girl confessed her love for
him ever since 3rd grade. Freddie D. finally had the courage to ask her out,
and of course, she had been waiting to yes to that for years. They grew up
and married each other to live happily forever.

Now, you heard the stories. I know which person i'd rather
be, but thats up to you. I wouldn't wanna end up like Barbra but thats only

me. We all want what we cant have but now's ur chance to go out withthat

special somebody ur waiting for. Take it or leave it. If you send this to-

1 person- you will lose all luck in ur love life..... forever!!!!!

10 people- your crush will say they like you as a friend...... ONLY!!!!!

15 people- your crush will say they like you

20 people- your crush will ask you out!

25 people- your crush will kiss you!!

30 people - Your crush will have sex with you

35 people or more- All of the above!!

Don't blow it, it's ur chance to shine! Have everything u wanted, and more!

Now, complaining cus u dont have any
friends. Well theres an answer 4 everything. It's simple, just go in a chat

room, pick some names and send away! but here's the catch..... you only

have 1 hour
if the pain goes on im not gonna make it...!
DownShiftPlus Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
*glomps Matthew* a-are very kawaii M-matthew...^°^
candydandylover Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh Canada.....thank you.....I really do feel this way in the real world at times....
AnimePanther921 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2014  Student Writer
Awww...... Thanks Canada! I needed the encouragement! 
MsVideoGames Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2014
Awwwww!!! The ending was soooo cute!! :3
MsVideoGames Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2014
Awwwww!!! The ending was soooo cute!! :3
SchokiCookie Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014
Wow, like I'm realy am. When I'm ordering something I just shaking and feel the exact same thing.
Thanks Canada ;-;
ILikeCupcakez123 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014
*reads Canada's note*
Me: ... Stupid, stupid, stupid... I SHOULD'VE KNOOOOOOWN~!!!!! xDDD I love the story, by the way!! :3
PortgasDRani Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2014  Hobbyist
Of course, it's Canada! Of course! I mean, "Shy!Reader"! I am so stupid! :iconheaddeskplz:
Sanactras Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014  Student

TheOneOfYOursTruly Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014  Student Writer
Cloud-Cakes Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Canada :) you're so sweet
xXKimberIsAwesomeXx Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014
I play that game too!

And my mom calls me weird.


She's he weird one I the family.

kitsune-cross Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2015  Professional General Artist
Same here.
xXKimberIsAwesomeXx Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2015
mirahnorton Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014
At least you wouldn’t be totally bored, now was a great time to play ‘which rain drop will win’.

I know that game all too well. 😓
Nightflame131 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014
Awwwwww thanks Canada :3 <3 
Namara-Gyllban Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014
that ending had me like Cute Emoticon Blushing 
Luvbug---tan Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Student Digital Artist
honestly im rly antisocial and the note at the end made me have more hope as silly as it sounds ;;v;
GoldenSong2307 Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
It's not silly at all! :)
SorryImOnHiatus Featured By Owner May 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That's kinda what I'm like ^^ :hugs: Merci beacoup Canada
Theloneluna Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist
T-This is me all the time.... *Gets Hugged by my Pokemon* Why am I so shy?!?!?
Jojo-korea Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014
Thank you Matthew ^///^
lovekitsunenaru Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*puppydog wine* he gets me so well thank you Matthew
xXDestinyStarXx Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014
闭嘴 right?
Explosion245 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Student General Artist
yes: 3
LiesArentThatPretty Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Charmander~ *glomp*
jkdiroe Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014
I'm watching depressing Hetalia videos whilst reading fanfiction. I needed something to cheer me up. Thanks for doing the job.

pktcat Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Student Artist

I always order meatball subs.


So I'd be like

U-um...c-can I h-ave sub...and um...provolone cheese...and um.....

Canada: Wtf dude.

China: Can I have some toaru?

Me: ..that'll be it please......

America: AWESOME JOB DUDE. YOU'RE DOING GREAT. *slaps me on da back*

Me: ow...

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